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Well done Darren! Great to see that you have completed the 3 posts, and they are all visual!
I thought your 'In the Sun' lip synch task was really good - you seem really comfortable in front of the camera and you give a good performance.
Good understanding of the need to vary shots and to think about interesting framing.
Your written analysis shows that you are really thinking carefully about the things we have explored in class, and taking all suggestions on board. You clearly have a good understanding of what makes a good music video.
EBI
Some of the shots in your 'In the Sun' lip synch were a little unsteady - use a tripod
Your post on 'What makes a good music video' shows you are thinking carefully about what works, but avoid filling your blog with loads of videos straight from You Tube. I don't think any examiner would sit there and watch them all to see what you are referring to. SHOW them - take screen grabs only, or select only a few seconds from your sample videos to really demonstrate the ideas / techniques and points you have mentioned in your written comments.
One little thing - just check your spelling (maybe type in WORD and then check and copy over - that's what I always do with my emails as I'm not a strong speller!)
Overall, your blog is looking really good so far Darren. Think about my EBI suggestions, and please try really hard to keep on top of your blog this year.
Effort- VG
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